Lady Kyra

Hello, my friend, and thank you for writing an X-Men Fanfiction. I'm a fan of the concept (the earlier comic books are my favorite). Okay, so, I shall give you ...

Hehe. This was so good that I had to go back and read all of the other episodes. You are an incredible humor writer, and the way you are able ...

Hello, Keisha-Ann. You asked for a nit-picky critique, I give you one... The idea of this was quite good. I'm not usually a fan of the whole rhyming almost every ...

Keisha-Ann, Okay, time for my critique. I've read it before, and I love the use of onomatopoeia. It give the poem so much extra description. As for my nitpicks.... of ...

Hello! Welcome, welcome, thank you for your story. I shall try to give you a good review that shall benefit you. First of all, I love your name. Aurora Addison ...

Hey again. This is, yet again, full of emotion. I almost cried for some reason while I was reading it, and my friend (who is sitting next to me looking ...

You are an extremely brave person for writing this. Writing is reliving, as I always say, and to relive it is brave. I'm sorry about your dad, and that your ...

Hello! Here's what I have for you: I loved the first sentence. It sort of...sent me there. I love the smell of cinnamon, and when I read it, I could ...

Excellent poem. It really conveyed your feelings at the time. And I agree, it was the perfect length. Anything longer would have been a bit tedious, but this made me ...

*Takes very deep breath* That was very...deep. I had to read it several times to get the entire effect of it and let it sink in. The psychology and way ...

Very interesting. I can see how the theme of "Utopia" plays out, but I had a few problems reading it. First of all, please space your paragraphs more. I found ...

Very interesting. This seems to be a great beginning, and I can see how the plot-line can carry on. I'm interested to see how this will develop. Okay, on to ...

You have officially made me seem more insane than I already am to all of the people around me. Perhaps this wouldn't happen if I didn't read it on school ...

First off, don't say it sucks. This is never good. Always be positive. After all, I don't think it sucks. I actually think that the overall idea is quite good. ...

This is an extremely haunting story. The paragraph flow is interesting, and it kept me hanging till the end without ever losing my interest. It was also so descriptive, almost ...